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My Heart Has Failed Me
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:31:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My eyes are closing Breath is slowing I think I'm dying inside I have looked around a million times But there seems to be no way out My heart is failing Not beating as it should I feel like screaming But when I open up my mouth to shout No words will come out I start to shake From the cold I feel like nothing inside I'm so hollow So cold air resides And no warmth can fill the space My heart is getting worse now No one can help me now My life is ending And the only thing I had left has failed me
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Re: My Heart Has Failed Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by bluebird on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:37:19 AM AEST (User
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this is awesome.very sad but a good read.
~keep the faith~
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Re: My Heart Has Failed Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:15:24 AM AEST (User
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hello, yes this is a very good write and real sad and touching. i think my heart is failing too.....
take care |
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Re: My Heart Has Failed Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:39:56 AM AEST (User
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a very moving write, filled with emotions and feeling *hugs*
pixie xx |
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