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the burning flames
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:00:22 PM in AEST
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reach inside
the burning fire
watch me climb
the tears grow higher
scream and shout
i cant escape
your burning love
has swallowed my fate
i once thought
love wasnt for me
that id never esape
its misery
but looking twice
i caught a glimps
of all the truth
behind your lips
i learned the truth
again once more
with your love waiting
i shut the door
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2004-12-21 20:00:22]
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Re: the burning flames
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:05:05 PM AEST
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| I have a ? Did you walk in to love and shut the door? Or did you just shut the door... |
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Re: the burning flames
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:02:11 AM AEST
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nice job...it was short and simple, nice start, lovely job at rhyming...good form...
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