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your there for me

Contributed by tractorbabe on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:54:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



triped above
the air i breath
your waiting there
and watching me

glancing down
with out a frown
after you saw
my world crash down

you stood there and watched
as i picked up my life
you held me back
as i picked up the knife

not letting me die
when times are rough
you held my soal
as i grew tough




Copyright © tractorbabe ... [ 2005-01-10 16:54:15]
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Re: your there for me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:21:42 PM AEST
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I really like this..

"Not letting me die
When times are rough"

This reminds me alot of me and the love of my life..he keeps me going..

Really good job


Re: your there for me (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:22:56 PM AEST
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good to have someone to hold you back.. good rhymes..it's just the spelling..needs a bit of work..


Re: your there for me (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:39:02 PM AEST
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I liked the outcome of this piece,the fact that you made it through,you have a great person in your life,hold on to that person~
PumpkinPie




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