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twist and turn
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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twist and turn
cant get away
try to run
from everyday
lost of pain
once felt inside
mind and body
now collide
feelings run
afraid to be seen
free my soal
let it be clean
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2005-01-10 17:09:29]
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Re: twist and turn
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:15:43 PM AEST
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| I like the rhyme..just one tiny thing..the spelling of the word soal..is soul.. :-) |
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Re: twist and turn
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:05:08 AM AEST
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lost of pain
once felt inside
mind and body
now collide
it is kinda short, but still good. very nice bit there, keep it up...
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