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My Chambers
Contributed by
Sinned
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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My chambers
Come in whoever you art From out of the light into the dark Come into my foggy mist I wring my wrist Nervously For I fear what you will see In the sunlight you should bask No you came in and I hadn't ask Now that you are here I set aside and hide my fear In this compartment you see light Small and cute it's all my Gods insite Over here you can see what is dear Family friends and a bottle of beer Now watch your step this is my chamber of mess Worldly things I love to caress Over here everything for which I care Er'yeah, there's much room to spare This one you will like its nature with all of its beauty Sure keeps me busy avoiding eternities duty Stay away from that room its dark and deep You needen't know what enters and seeps Enter into the seven day chamber He set aside Not much here I busied myself with things of the world wide Now this chamber holds my memories My childhood days aunts uncles friends and family Many are gone now and I feel sad Then again those were some of the best days I had O' you peeked into my box of the obscene I blush at my adult things you now have seen Now I shall take you out of here Before you see the thing I fear My chamber thats dark and deep Every stench with an awful reek My mortal sins the dung of earth Wouldn't want anyone to know my true worth You traveled the chambers of my mind If you had stayed without you would have known a man of a different kind
Sinned
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Re: My Chambers
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfman on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:44:01 PM AEST (User
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yes we do hide things within ourselves that we dont want others to see but they will find them out eventualy dont stay within your self for to long you might not want to come back.
this was a good poem nicely done imagery, I liked this poem alot please post again soon.
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Re: My Chambers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:56:06 PM AEST (User
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Fascinating. All the compartments we divide ourselves into. Mine has always been more mushed up, but I'll get it organized one day. This is quite an interesting summation.
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