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Humility
Contributed by
kellros
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:54:35 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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Raining outside, Pushing a car, Silent laughter.
Copyright ©
kellros
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2005-01-20 06:54:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Humility
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:06:52 AM AEST (User
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It's a brilliant try..I may have counted wrong.. it should be 5/7/5..but I'm in terrible pain and maybe I counted wrong.. |
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Re: Humility
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:56:47 AM AEST (User
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It works. Just went through something like this myself, and the last line says so much.
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