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A Hurricane
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:17:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The warmth, the pain
That comes with in
The warmth, the vain
That comes from in
Press it deep
Watch it glow
Slowly taking
Away my soul
Dripping beads
Flow down like rain
Like a bloody mess
From a hurricane
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tractorbabe
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2005-01-25 22:17:45]
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Re: A Hurricane
(User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:20:44 AM AEST
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wicked write.
can relate to 'slowly taking away my soul'
anger,such a messy emotion.
i could see the poem being longer but its still wicked
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: A Hurricane
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by visualizing_life on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:19:15 PM AEST
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| very short but to the point...i like it is a good flow...lol...no really it was good |
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