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Keepsake
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:56:28 PM in AEST
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As I ponder on past regrets
I wonder about future mistakes
I notice I am forever in debt
You brought forth day break
You ended my heartache
My life is My Keepsake
I was treating my life like a game of roulette
I was running away from life
You made me reset
You took away the knife
You saved my life
I am forever in debt
My life is My Keepsake
And I have you...
To Thank
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ForeverAlone
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2005-01-25 22:56:28]
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Re: Keepsake
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:25:51 PM AEST
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=] wonderful, brilliant write. much like your others in that aspect. i am very impressed with you as a writer and as a person. i cant say that about many people. but you deserve more credit than you are giving yourself.
and with the future.
you will make mistakes, but that doesnt matter, it matters how you deal with them.
youre welcome. |
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Re: Keepsake
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:35:27 AM AEST
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| A very good write..One that should have had more comments and alot more reads to it..The last stanza here is top notch..You have a very good talent going for you..Don't waste it. |
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