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Enter My Broken World
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Watch and listen As I shake and shatter your reality Enter my broken world I defy the definition of normal Tears don't mean sadness And blood doesn't mean death Hold on as the world beneath you spins And the walls fade away Leaving you to experience an unkown world Of strange realities and famous secrets Remember former days as you fade away As you dissolve into mental absorbtion I defy the definition of normal Tears don't mean sadness And blood doesn't mean death Watch and listen As I shake and shatter your reality Enter my broken world
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Re: Enter My Broken World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:32:20 AM AEST (User
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ahah, but i bring the superglue to fix it. =] |
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Re: Enter My Broken World
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 10:15:25 AM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful poem. I especially like how you bring back some of the earlier lines and restate them at the end. Great title! Keep writing! |
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