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untitleed...(sry)
Contributed by
morgana
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:39:59 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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what have you done to me? a shadow of agony as emotions shudder. once we shared innocence, untainted and childlike, but your thirst drifted away. a furious pool of bitterness - tears follow night, follow rain, love dissolved. in a haze of hatred, i condemn you.
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Re: untitleed...(sry)
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:26:12 AM AEST (User
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thirst doesn't drift away..it becomes more parching..and someones would go elsewhere to drink.. I can however see hunger growing more rapacious..or hunger drifting away..but never thirst..I'm growing thirstier by the minute..lol..how bout as a title..Pools of Bitterness? |
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