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A hand
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's you
that can help me
It's you
that can see
I need you
now more then ever
it's true
we can be together
A hand
to help understand
I need your hand
to help me stand
A terrible thing
just happened to me
and now i only cry
and i can't deny
Please help me
get through this
Please help me
You are who i miss
I lay helpess trying not to think
its hard to even blink
It's hard to even see
So now i ask you to help me
Copyright ©
savedbydeath
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2005-01-31 23:19:56]
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Re: A hand
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by spazie on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:37:16 PM AEST
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it wasent bad but the lines were kinda dull but keep going and you got the skillz to make a masterpiece
well done
SPAZIE
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Re: A hand
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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well it was great i loved it n spazzie what a spazzoid and to me it is a master piece keep em up love ya
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Re: A hand
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:19:05 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull, awesome, heart felt plea for help.
I'm sure you'll get the hand u searched for.
Use to think i didn't need any body but it didn't take long to see different.
that hand will be in yours before u know it.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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