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Contributed by vanilla_flame on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:41:53 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets



Colors have been washed
away from my world
Lifeless creatures walk
around.
Evil eyes just keep on staring

Why must you always
be on my mind?
I know that day
we were just messing around.
But was it much more?

I'm not your
comfort object,
you can't decide when I'm yours.

I can feel your constant stare
I can't read your mind, your intentions
are so unclear

I wish it all gone
I wish it was dawn

For I can't get past these nights,
I try to hate you with all my might

I'll get over you, dont worry
For this is my last writing about you

I don't care what you say
I don't care what you think
I'm going my own way...




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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by vanilla_flame on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:05:18 PM AEST
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Wasnt sure what topic to put this under. There was a couple of them that fitted. I chose Secrets because this poem was based on a secret thats been tearing me up inside.


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by cherrycoke on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:18:07 PM AEST
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i know .e.x.a.c.t.l.y. what you mean! I was in that situation, and it still haunts me. Can't say I've ever written about it before.... or have I?? Keep it up


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:02:28 AM AEST
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idea for a title: Comfort Food.. (maybe?)


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by vanilla_flame on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:07:07 PM AEST
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thank you for the posts. I'm not sure Comfort Food fits it. Thank you so much though for the suggestion.


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:18:03 PM AEST
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how about "leaving my imaginary friend" I am not sure if that feits but this is the tone that I got from this poem, if you dont like it I will try to think of another one.

this was a good poem I liked how this individual deals with the situalion very confidently but also regetful too. please do post again.

wolfman


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:32:05 AM AEST
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this is a pretty good poem
and i have a few suggestions for a title:
maybe -my way- or -i try to forget-
(just some suggestions)
anyway thanks for the comment on my poem.

elizabeth (catz77)


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by vanilla_flame on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 03:50:48 PM AEST
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I Try to Forget, i like it thx for the comment


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:27:24 PM AEST
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how about "Forgeting you, I'm moving on."

again just my opion.

wolfman


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by vanilla_flame on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 05:38:43 PM AEST
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ooo thats good

well now its between "I Try to Forget" and "Forgeting You, Moving On"

thx


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:46:24 AM AEST
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i liked comfort food as the idea for the title, it fitted for me, either that or "insecurity blanket" or something like that?




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