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my freedom
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:39:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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dusty dry apon the ground this old road winds around
the wheels that turn dust in the air on the rearview mirror sun sets a glare
tryin to find a better place my freedom, i can almost tast
tempting fate acroos the line im so far now it's almost mine
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2005-02-06 22:39:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: my freedom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 06:08:03 PM AEST (User
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not bad...couple of spelling errors, but okays on form, nice ryhming, nice job..
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