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She needs Help

Contributed by savedbydeath on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:45:45 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Tears fall down
as she's getten around.
Why is she this way?
Will she ever change?
Why is she so strange?
I have nothing to say
She brings an uncertainty
She's not reasuring
She's not living reality
She can't see nothing
She lives in a bubbel
which gets her into trouble
I need to help her
but why bother?
She don't listen to me
She can't seem to see
Someone please help her




Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2005-02-27 23:45:45]
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Re: She needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:22:12 AM AEST
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maybe u should let her sit down and u listen. if we condem our friends or anyone we push them a way and make um feel like nuthing.
A true friend will listen when it's time to listen. If she ask for your advice do it in luv.
I speak from experience. As a child I went to church mostly when the doors were open.
I had to get a way from the church after my life was a mountain of cunfussion 2 find God.
i don't mean to sound prechey 'cause to me that shoves a person further away.
Jus listen, 9 times out of 10 that's all a person needs is someone to listen.
luv, hugg, smiles,
emy


Re: She needs Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 03:44:55 PM AEST
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preachin lol well hmm yea id just let her be n be there when she needs u




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