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Falling
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:25:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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the wind pulls forward
rips across her back
its to late now
the gravity attacks
everythign is black
theres nothing to see
i just keep falling
so silently
you picked me up
but u let me fall
so deep that i
have nothin at all
right before
the bottom was there
you caught me tight
in still mid air
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tractorbabe
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2005-03-02 22:25:05]
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Re: Falling
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:33:55 PM AEST
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Very good write.
it's so nice that u have someone to catch u.
huggs,
emy
A masterpeice. |
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Re: Falling
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by visualizing_life on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:44:47 PM AEST
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| i like it...at least u have sumbody to love u and catch u back...much luv |
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Re: Falling
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by eggroll on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 04:43:07 AM AEST
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beautiful poem.
nicely written. |
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