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Array ( [sid] => 89797 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Until I Am With You [time] => 2005-04-04 01:56:59 [hometext] => I dedicate this one to the guy who came up with the last two lines, who is the guy I long to be with! [bodytext] => Iíve found love once
But was it real
Was it true
I donít think so
I might have at one point
But I was blind from the start
My friends were right
Not one of them liked him
And they all told me
That he wasnít right for me
But I was just longing so
For someone to love
For someone to say they love me
In the way I need to be loved
He was the one to tell me
In the way I wanted to hear it
But it was all a lie
One big fat lie
Because all he wanted
Was exactly what my friends warned me about
A booty call
But then I met you
The one who brightened up my day
The day the other guy told me to
Never talk to him again
I was upset
And just talking to you
Made just a world of difference
At that moment
All my worries
All my sorrows
And all my pain
Just melted away
Like ice sitting in the sun
On a warm, clear sky day
Everything you said
In everyway you put it
Just put a smile on my face
And you didnít even know it
I thought I loved once
But was this one real
I donít know
We havenít given it that big of a chance yet
Iíve forgotten about the guy
The guy my friends warned me about
And now I am onto a new one
Who seems truer
And more faithful
And has never let me down
Iíve known him forever
As has he
You can call me a *****, a ****, or whatever you want
But that doesnít change the facts
The facts of how he treats me with respect
As the other treated me like his dog
All I long right now
Is for you to be in my arms
And for your lips to touch mine
And have no worries in mind
I wouldíve done it yesterday
But thereís a few things standing in our way
One is your girlfriends
Two is my parents
Three is my siblings
All who youíve known for like, ever
And they donít like it
All because youíre a little older than me
But if I am not with you
Then I am not truly happy
Not truly
Because I have a true smile on my face when I am with you
But anyone else, itís a fake smile
Trying not to cry
Because when I am not with you
All I want is to be with you
And love you
And have you to hold for ever and always
But I have finally figured out
That I am
Destined to be alone
Until I am with you
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Until I Am With You

Contributed by BabyTears89 on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 01:56:59 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Iíve found love once
But was it real
Was it true
I donít think so
I might have at one point
But I was blind from the start
My friends were right
Not one of them liked him
And they all told me
That he wasnít right for me
But I was just longing so
For someone to love
For someone to say they love me
In the way I need to be loved
He was the one to tell me
In the way I wanted to hear it
But it was all a lie
One big fat lie
Because all he wanted
Was exactly what my friends warned me about
A booty call
But then I met you
The one who brightened up my day
The day the other guy told me to
Never talk to him again
I was upset
And just talking to you
Made just a world of difference
At that moment
All my worries
All my sorrows
And all my pain
Just melted away
Like ice sitting in the sun
On a warm, clear sky day
Everything you said
In everyway you put it
Just put a smile on my face
And you didnít even know it
I thought I loved once
But was this one real
I donít know
We havenít given it that big of a chance yet
Iíve forgotten about the guy
The guy my friends warned me about
And now I am onto a new one
Who seems truer
And more faithful
And has never let me down
Iíve known him forever
As has he
You can call me a *****, a ****, or whatever you want
But that doesnít change the facts
The facts of how he treats me with respect
As the other treated me like his dog
All I long right now
Is for you to be in my arms
And for your lips to touch mine
And have no worries in mind
I wouldíve done it yesterday
But thereís a few things standing in our way
One is your girlfriends
Two is my parents
Three is my siblings
All who youíve known for like, ever
And they donít like it
All because youíre a little older than me
But if I am not with you
Then I am not truly happy
Not truly
Because I have a true smile on my face when I am with you
But anyone else, itís a fake smile
Trying not to cry
Because when I am not with you
All I want is to be with you
And love you
And have you to hold for ever and always
But I have finally figured out
That I am
Destined to be alone
Until I am with you




Copyright © BabyTears89 ... [ 2005-04-04 01:56:59]
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Re: Until I Am With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:44:37 AM AEST
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I see true love reflecting from this poem. Good poem. ;-)


Re: Until I Am With You (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:32:55 AM AEST
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love comes in many forms,this one seem to be
the true kind,good write


Re: Until I Am With You (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:12:21 PM AEST
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love,thats a crazy word.but i feel it through your poem,good job


Re: Until I Am With You (User Rating: 1 )
by FearMyRawr on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:42:31 PM AEST
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Wow... you do got it bad for him don't you??? If he hurts you like John did... oh god... David is breaking out!

You can feel what you're feeling in this, absolutely wonderful, baby!!!

Loves, xoxo
Leigha




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