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My Disease''
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 12:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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So drunk I can hardly think So peaceful I could barely drink The cup of life full to the rim My thirst slowly wears itself thin
Stand and judge me, you alone Convicted I sand, finally dethroned A sigh of relief echoes in my tone The future momentarily postponed
A relapse of the subconscious Repressed fixations Ego damaged and forsaken The collective memory, together escaping
A psychotic disarrangement Of desires and fantasy fulfillment Discouraged from prophesizing Of a poetic genius uprising
A genetic compromising Organic, subtle pacifying A stench, unbearable, unsettling Revolting, sickening, unforgiving!
Remove me from this dark hole I beg of you, please Release me from my misery My anger, my desires, my disease
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2005-04-05 12:14:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Disease''
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:57:14 PM AEST (User
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I've read this one several times before, but haven't commented because I could relate just a little too well with it...This is a dark, depressed write, and I hope this sadness is long behind you...
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