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Hope my Phoenix
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:20:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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winds crash with a cold ocean breeze a death like chill flows through me who could fly in all this terbulence
yet across the way a flint of silver my smile broadens and i do quiver it's almost time to let go
so long have i been stranded wondering when i came, can i leave now the fires consume my doubts
the stars swallow that which couldn't breath this great hope a phoenix carries me it's song consumes all of what i am
i feel it's passion flow through me this mighty beast has no equal no enemy where in the universe does it take me?
days go by like seconds in time i'm older yet i do not die in the end i would just rise again, from the ashes of my phoenix
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Re: Hope my Phoenix
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hakiokusaken on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:50:50 PM AEST (User
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Great write. I think this poem was well writen. Excellent Job. Keep em coming.
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