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Contributed by
rustygrl33
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Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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i hear the beeping in my head as it grows louder and louder insanity is coming into sight breathing is becoming impossible the mud is sucking me in all strength, all hope is gone what is happening? stuck and sinking fast the beeping is now gone it is pounding inside my heart is a clock ticking time away a hand pulls me out as soon as it touches me everything comes back i go soaring into the sky where the hand came from
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(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 10:01:30 PM AEST (User
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Well this is definately a different uniquely written write.....i enjoyed reading it actually....where it says as soon as it touches me everything comes back....after th ehand pulls you out.....and then you go soaring into the sky where the hand came from it's as if your almost saying god reached down to pull you out of the destruction you were in....tha's what i got out of it anyway this is a beautifully written write i enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing it....
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