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I have to walk alone...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:17:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i'm calm as i hold you slow beating heart i'm not gone cause i've told you i'll try not to part
but my life is a distance can't stay for too long reasons can't list this i'll miss you til dawn
i'll reach for your skin to warm what's not warm i'll keep you within with arm around arm
but i have to walk alone to be saddened by me i'll call on the phone to let you hear me
cause i'm fading, like the sun breaking ... before everyone i'm taking my time, to fade next in line aching ... too long have i missed you sweet world...sweet smile...sweet girl.
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Re: I have to walk alone...
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:54:08 AM AEST (User
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This poem is one of your top in my books. This was truly a flawless right that really took over my emotions and thoughts as I wrote. This write couldn’t have been written or worded any better my friend. It was sad but also I felt so much love and emotions when I read it. Thank you for sharing another great write. I’d write more about it but as you know things here in Iraq have been busy so I don’t have a lot of time. Bye for now my friend….Steve
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Re: I have to walk alone...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eyeris on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:14:16 PM AEST (User
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I Enjoyed this poem....full of emotion and thought.....I seem to enjoy poems about lost love... |
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