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who are you
Contributed by
chefhmboyrd
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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who are you
i thought you were my friend, my lover, my reason for being,
now it seems all you can do is spew hate and vile things,
you are telling all my deepest fears
to those who only want to see me in tears
i thought you loved me, i thought you cared
now it seems if i only dared
to call you, you wouldn't be
the same person that you were to me
when i loved you
who are you
i know we didn't end well
i know i hurt you i can tell
the way you talk about me to my friends
yeah they tell me, but in the end
i can't help but think that you
wouldn't do the things that you do
if you still happened to be
the same person who loved me
when i loved you
who are you
you told me that your last true lover
hurt you and you couldn't tell her
you said she changed before your eyes
to someone you didn't recognize
then she left without a word
do you know how that occurred
people change you know they do
i'm not the same person who loved you
when you loved me
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2005-05-18 09:24:00]
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Re: who are you
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:41:27 AM AEST
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| what an eye opening poem. how true and sad that it is that people you once loved change into someone else. This is a very powerful poem.. thanks for sharing! |
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Re: who are you
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by czendarski on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:10:33 AM AEST
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| Very sad story. I think many people will be able to relate to this, especially younger adults. Keep on writing the poetry. I like your rhyme scheme. |
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