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Sensations
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My skin still feels the sensations
From when I held you close
I can still smell you all over me
Even on my feathers
They can never be as soft as you
I can still taste your lips
From that amazing well those amazing kisses
That felt like they could last an eternity
A perfect splendor a simple forever
When I close my eyes I can sometimes still
Hear our hearts beating as one
I have all these things I feel from you
Haunting me always
And when they start to fade
When I start to forget that you
Are not a dream
You come through that door
And I am hopelessly in love again
And I can do all I did and more
To have it all haunt me again
I would not have it another way
Coz with you in my life I never
Feel alone
And with me in your life
You never have to hurt again
Or feel alone
I hope that after I have left
That you can feel all the things I do
And iI hope it never starts to fade
Before I can come through your door
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Re: Sensations
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by poet70 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 04:07:20 PM AEST
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Very greatwrite, got me to thinking about me and me lover, you did great, very detailed, brought me into the poeml, and was about to draw out an awesome picture with your words, keep it up, it was great.
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Re: Sensations
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:36:07 PM AEST
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| Some doors will be closed to you but certiantly not this one, beautiful write, muaw. |
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Re: Sensations
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 07:41:30 AM AEST
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Fabulous
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Sensations
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:19:04 PM AEST
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ANOTHA amazing write...u neva disappoint
i can relate to this 1 as u talk of still feeling the sensations from her n still tasting her kiss
i love dat and i love dis poem...except my love doesnt return like ur poem :(
but wow, beautiful, powerful u r BEAUTIFUL |
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