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Gone

Contributed by so_fetch on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




To watch the sky swell, sullen shades of grey
Brings to an end, a long and painful day

I watch you through my eyes
Slowly moving away
Come back come back dont go I say

You walk further on now I no longer see
It tears me to bits as you are part of me

For you are my love, my hearts been stole
All thats left is a gaping hole

You take one last look as you disappear
Leaving me standing, in the cold, in the tears

A prosperous misson to break my heart in two
The irony is I used to never love you

Oh alas...i need to rewind!
I never thought love could be so damn blind!

For love or blindness I care not
I don't want another heartbreaking thought

I start to run as the tears roll down
For where i find you, then my heart shall be found

My heart found in ashes where you burnt it at the stake
A love not needed nor counted as fake

Was real as i live as real as it dies
As real as you left as real as i cried

How could you do this?
Leave it in flames
Have you no morals, no love, no shame?

Non existant, no kind, no care
No heart no soul, this I can't bare

My life wasted on loving you
Being there, wanting you, again with this I can't go through

Il kill you first,then kill myself
Yes baby that's what I'll do
I'll stab you to death then silt my own wrists
Oh baby yes I'll kill you too

Imagine the grin on my face when I cut my own flesh
Imagine the joy when I turn over and cry
Imagine the pain when the blood all runs out
Imagine when I lay my head and simply die




Copyright © so_fetch ... [ 2005-05-25 18:04:00]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by ElatedNBliss on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:10:16 PM AEST
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good thing u said it was written by two people cuase the beginning has a different vibe than the ending. cuase i would of been sittting here with a puzzled look on my face..... nice intro. very nice


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:13:50 PM AEST
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like romeo and juliet but twisted...i like it...i like it alot lol


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by so_fetch on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:41:33 PM AEST
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Yeah I wrote the intro she wrote the ending, we have different styles lol


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Phantomdream on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:12:04 PM AEST
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Umm.....you could use an editor, first off, and secondly....I don't know how to put it nicely. This seems a little off.


Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by so_fetch on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:22:51 PM AEST
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Is a very old poem, I'm not that concerned, I'm just sticking up all my old stuff because I've nowere else to put it




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