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Array ( [sid] => 96605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Planned [time] => 2005-06-02 15:18:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Life is not everlasting,
Memories are gone with the wind,
Emotions fade like an old painting.
Love is full of guilt and sin.

Pore the cup of the passion we have,
Sharp razor cut my heart in halve.

Problems come like poring rain,
Friendship never happens theyíre just fables,
Good will always bring pain.
In life everyone is labeled.

Brake away from the destiny,
Is our life planned like a blue print?
How would I know whatís best or me?
Itís life worth living for pocket lint.

If planned then why live,
Why live knowing I have no free will,
Why try knowing I donít need to live.
Look down from the window cill.

Awake & realize moments,
Be aware of every second,
Mind filled sonnets.
Moon & star I recon.

Street filled with sensitive lives,
Keep walking down the road with strives.

Soundless cry of the wanted,
Look around nothing happened.

Feel the tears of joy,
Feel my wrath with toy.

In the end who is really here,
Who is really alive?
At the end will you be in fear.
How many fingers do you have, five?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Ranchan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Planned

Contributed by Ranchan on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Life is not everlasting,
Memories are gone with the wind,
Emotions fade like an old painting.
Love is full of guilt and sin.

Pore the cup of the passion we have,
Sharp razor cut my heart in halve.

Problems come like poring rain,
Friendship never happens theyíre just fables,
Good will always bring pain.
In life everyone is labeled.

Brake away from the destiny,
Is our life planned like a blue print?
How would I know whatís best or me?
Itís life worth living for pocket lint.

If planned then why live,
Why live knowing I have no free will,
Why try knowing I donít need to live.
Look down from the window cill.

Awake & realize moments,
Be aware of every second,
Mind filled sonnets.
Moon & star I recon.

Street filled with sensitive lives,
Keep walking down the road with strives.

Soundless cry of the wanted,
Look around nothing happened.

Feel the tears of joy,
Feel my wrath with toy.

In the end who is really here,
Who is really alive?
At the end will you be in fear.
How many fingers do you have, five?




Copyright © Ranchan ... [ 2005-06-02 15:18:36]
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Re: Planned (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:07:42 PM AEST
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Great Write, very true. Keep it up.

--amanda--


Re: Planned (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 06:36:40 PM AEST
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well written, very great flow. enjoyed reading this.






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