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When i'm Done
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i opened up my heart to you
you helped me through
i opened up my eyes just to see you gone
the dark night tears keep going on
no one hears me
no one can see
i tried to hold onto you
my heart needs you
i'm fading away
i'm dying today
why can't the sorrow kill me
why can't you believe
you haven't completely let go
but deep down i shall know
the time is coming
and then there will be nothing
i want to let go of the pain
but its what i always maintain
you'll eventually be gone
thats when i'm done
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2005-06-06 15:14:56]
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Re: When i'm Done
(User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 07:05:16 AM AEST
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| awesome write |
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Re: When i'm Done
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 07:12:06 AM AEST
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| very good write so who is it u tried to hold onto?? |
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