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she is broken
Contributed by
Taylor
on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:19:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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she couldnt tell you why she feels this way
but she feels like this every day
confused with all the lies
because she is broken inside
she has too manny problems
she cant fight her dreams
thiers no place to hide
whare she can safely dry her eyes
she is broken inside
she is incompleate and confused
she will never be amused
when he finaly comes home
she will never feel alone
her memory of him will never die
with out you she is broken inside
she can put away all her pain
so she can have one more sunny day with you in her life
as the sarrow falls from her eyes
she thinks about how broken she is inside
with out him forever by her side
she walks alone on the avenue of lonelyness
her shadow is the only that will fallow
it wont be long she and him will be together again
she cant fight her dreams
thiers no place to hide
she is forever broken inside
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Taylor
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2005-06-12 14:19:33]
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Re: she is broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by brokenbutterfly on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:25:31 PM AEST
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| good poem- very moving- but not to be mean or anything but isn't like half of it from that avril lavigne song "nobody's home"? |
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Re: she is broken
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:45:02 AM AEST
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i like this too...one tip you might want to check your spelling before you post hheehe. it just presents itself better! lol
but i liked this, and I feel broken inside because he is not beside me........i can relate
well done |
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