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the way .he looks . at . Me.
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
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Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:33:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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his eyes
a glare
my eyes
their stare.
hidden behind a lie
safley discreet
not asking why
shattering his spirits
burning my soul.
heart break is death.
of a love grown cold.
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2005-06-12 21:33:20]
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Re: the way .he looks . at . Me.
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:52:58 PM AEST
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i like this very much, it holds a lot of meaning, of which i can relate.
i like the last two lines and yes "Heart break is death of a love grown cold."
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Re: the way .he looks . at . Me.
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by ShesAKillerQueen on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:17:14 PM AEST
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very short and sweet, love the use of words in this one. nice write.
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