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It's done
Contributed by
so_fetch
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Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:32:41 PM in AEST
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I could stand by you
It would do you no good
I could stay with you forever
And you think I should
I don't want to argue
All that's in the past
I can't help you
I knew it wouldn't last
I've shed tears
My hearts been broken
You've destroyed our path
Used up your last token
You've torn me in half
Torn me apart
Now we're finished
And I won't have a change of heart
Maybe in the end
It's for the best
For me AND you
So don't protest
I'm not being selfish
I'm doing this for you
It's time to start anew
Find someone else to screw
It's done
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so_fetch
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2005-06-21 12:32:41]
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Re: It's done
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by justmeallicanbe on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:39:22 PM AEST
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| WOW. I could really feel your emotions in this. Great write. H |
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Re: It's done
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 01:08:38 PM AEST
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I like this a lot, and can really relate!! Well done displaying your emotions and driving home the point...
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