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The Morning After
Contributed by
notaprettygirl
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Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 07:20:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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my eyes flutter open
as sunlight slips through the blinds
i forget where i am for a moment
then i feel your limbs
wrapped so smooth around me
how could i forget
i roll over
to find you resting
as peaceful as i have ever
seen you before
i love to watch you sleep
the rhythmic rise and fall
of your delicate breasts
the way your eyelashes curl
so lightly against your cheeks
the softness and warmth
of your body pressed against mine
the way your hands tangle themselves
so beautifully in my hair
i lie there so quietly with you
among the twisted sheets
soaked with the scent of passion
remembering last night...
the glow of candlelight
shimmering across our bare curves
your blue eyes
wide and seducing
glazed over with hunger
shivering
as your hot kisses
glide along my neck
sliding my hands
down your back
gripping your hips
with such sweet urgency
whimper after breathless whimper
my legs tighten around your waist
as you take me so deeply
running my tongue
along your lips
i taste myself
the way i taste to you...
slowly your eyes open
a smile spreads
across your sleepy face
you pull me closer
as you whisper
"i always love the morning after"
our hands start wandering
once more
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notaprettygirl
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2003-02-05 19:20:16]
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 06:34:42 AM AEST
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MMmmm loved this..the morning after is always so good....
Jenni |
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:26:10 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written ... |
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:36:52 AM AEST
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| mmmm this was fantastic - beautiful, sensual and expressed with true colours of the soul. keep writing xxx |
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:33:34 PM AEST
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thanks a lot guys. :) i'm glad that you enjoyed this. it's 'biographical' and it brings back good memories. :) take care. ::hugs::
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 05:47:05 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, I really love the ending. |
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:31:09 PM AEST
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| whew! and I mean WHEW!! An erotic masterpiece and mmm mmm what a mental picture. Very well done. Larry :o) |
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:20:52 PM AEST
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| thank, infamous. :) i'm glad you liked it. i'm glad that i gave you a wonderful mental picture, Raker. :blush: *hehe* take care. ::hugs:: |
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Re: Re: The Morning After
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Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 12:09:40 PM AEST
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| Loved it . Brings back memories |
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