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Afterglow
Contributed by
tease_whizz
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Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 03:54:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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The morning after the night before
Eternal seconds when I was yours
I watch you in the hazy morning light
I feel no sin, i know its right
The rhythmic rise and fall of your chest
A blissful state of angelic rest
Your arm draped lazily round my waist
I gaze at the lips I longed to taste
Can't believe I'm here, so warm within
My body against your naked skin
I remember how you made me yours
And with each memory my heart soars
How you took me to the heights of bliss
And let me drown in each sweet kiss
I feel the warmth of you beside me
Remembering the ecstasy of you inside me
Aching with pleasure and taking you deep
Allowing you a piece of my soul to keep
I felt so beautiful and full of desire
You set my fragile heart on fire
I've never tasted a kiss so sweet
Pressed close to you in the smouldering heat
Eternal seconds when I was yours
The morning after the night before
We kiss again, our bodies entwine
And surrender to bliss just one more time...
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Re: Re: Afterglow
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Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:43:11 PM AEST
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This was so tastefully done..I enjoyed it...
Jenni |
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Re: Re: Afterglow
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Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 02:54:45 PM AEST
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| awww kate this is absolutely beautiful, breathtaking and passionate, gives me a warm glow inside, keep em coming |
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Re: Re: Afterglow
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Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:16:15 AM AEST
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| absolutely excellent!!!... i have to show this to my husbnad!... blessings... |
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Re: Re: Afterglow
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Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:13:29 PM AEST
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well done kate,
love this so much, beautifully written,
hugs always nessa |
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Re: Re: Afterglow
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Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:12:58 AM AEST
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awesome... it really took me on a ride... :)
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Re: Re: Afterglow
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:00:43 AM AEST
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| You really have a knack for words. The poems I've read aren't crude but express the moment so well. Excellent, keep it up! |
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