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A Million Gallons of Urine
Contributed by
jason_robert_britt
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Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:50:58 PM in AEST
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December's chill does not compare
To empty nights when you aren't there
Abandoned me alone and cold
Dealt my hand I choose to fold
The sparrow's song could not bring cheer
A million suns won't dry the tears
A million knives could not cut holes
As gaping wide as is my soul
My life's a cage
Restraints hold tight
My life's a stage
Exit left or right
The act is over
You don't have to play
Just piss on me
Like the rest walk away
Decayed forest sprouts from one spot
A million worms can't eat the rot
A million leeches found no blood
A million pints lost in the flood
A million needles found no vein
A million pills won't ease the pain
A million knives could not cut holes
As gaping wide as is my soul
My life's a cage
Restraints hold tight
My life's a stage
Exit left or right
The act is over
You don't have to play
Just piss on me
Like the rest walk away
I played the fool
in your game of temptation
Rolled the dice twice
and crapped out our relations
Fell off the wagon
and threw up my elation
Covered in piss
I am your masturbation
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jason_robert_britt
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2003-03-17 15:50:58]
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:05:08 AM AEST
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| this is absolutely brilliant... well written and the point is right there... excellent write... blessings to you and to writing it out... |
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:31:23 PM AEST
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| Cool....alittle weird, but so am I |
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 03:14:54 PM AEST
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| your poems are so filled with emotion, this was a great write, so vivid... keep it up ~Apryl |
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:15:11 AM AEST
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Very very well written i liked this one so very much! It is one of the best poems I have read on this site!
Amy |
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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| Thank you for your kind words, I am flattered that you find it one of your favorites. With all the emotion I put into my writting I am often afraid that no one will like them.... that I might go too far with words. I appreciate your feed back and will be looking foward to reading poetry that you post on this site as well. Many blessings - jason |
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 01:35:31 AM AEST
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vivid
blunt
very very well written
can hear the anger in your words
and feel your pain
when they are read |
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Re: Re: A Million Gallons of Urine
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 12:43:24 PM AEST
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| Once in a while I read or hear something and say "I wish I had done that". I couldnt help but hear Cobain playing his guitar somewhere in the distance as I read this. |
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