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American Dream

Contributed by ml02 on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 08:40:51 AM in AEST
Topic: notopic



do you hate me
cause
i'm livin' out
the american dream
are you jealous
b/c i'm
a white
gay male
do you hate me
do wish you could be
just like me

19
ready to
have some fun
sounds like
your f***in' personal
oops
i said a bad word
kiss it
then
suck it
ooh la la

what is this kid thinkin'
he's so vulgar

you look
and stare
as i pass
wit my man bag
roll your eyes
cause
you can't be me
walk on hoe
you don't phase me
cause i know
you wish
you could
suck a censored
like me
you ain't got
skills
to please
so sorry
but
step back
and let a man
show you
how its done
cause
we just do it
better
b****
oops
the potty mouth
wash it out wit soap
it doesn't go away
maybe
the cummin
will clear it up

oh my god
this kid is dirty
where did you find him
in the gutter
on the corner
hes whats wrong
with the world

critics
complain
homophodes
look me up
and down
focus
on the crotch
i see
you begin to drool
does it turn you on
when
i bend over
you wanna slap it
grab it
tight
am i
your eye candy
sugar and spice
and everything tight
oops
i mean right
i mean nice
i mean
i mean
what do i
even mean

yeah
mr. business man
you ain't gay
i believe you
yeah
you just censor wit men
so
you remember
that you don't like it
and why
boom
the bomb is droppin
your secret is front page news
how scandalous
i swear
i didn't tell a soul
and even so
why you mad
whats wrong
wit livin' out
the american dream

free yourself
don't conform
to what
society
says you should be
always
keep em guessin'
one minute bi
next gay
and the story
never ends

i don't creep
wit out his wrapp'd
neither should you
heres to the dream
democrats
and all
massachusetts
lead the way
let a man
wed
a man
and
small minds
need to shut up
and die
cause
we commin up
wit the american dream
this is 2003
and we're gonna be heard
no more
disrespect
i demand
the right
to be
who i wanna be
and
ain't that
the american dream
to be what
you wanna be?




Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2003-05-19 08:40:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Re: American Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 06:06:28 PM AEST
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i cant believe no one has commented on this... this is a great poem and i completely agree with your views, i liked the way u wrote it, flowed very well... i cant wait to read more of ur stuff ~Apryl


Re: Re: American Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by on Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:43:15 AM AEST
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This is great. I totally agree with you view point. I actually know people who think it is wrong to be gay. And I think that is wrong. I do not judge people like that. I only judge people by how the treat others. Which is the way it should be. Great poem.

ShadowsCloud


Re: Re: American Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 08:50:20 PM AEST
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***** bad ass. i totally agree, gay marriage should be legal, i really can't understand why it's not.
this write had a great flow and an even better message. keep it up.

51




 

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