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Tides Of Love...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 06:25:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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Your breath upon my nakedness,my innocence,you embrace
With gentle hands upon my body,your kisses drape me like fine lace
Sweat courses down my inner thighs,you meet them with your tongue
As here beneath your magic spell,my innocence comes undone
Heat eminates from desire,lustful sighs caress my lips
You come to me and in my mouth,our sweetness slowly drips
Bathed in the moisture of our longing,I'm swept away upon the tide
Drowning in the depths of my emotions, as I pull you deep inside
An opened window invites the breeze,it drifts across our skin
Yet it fails to cool the heat we feel,the burning here within
Tender is the moment,as you fall against my breasts
And tears of love fall freely,to feel the heartbeat in your chest
I lie beneath your magic spell and am lost within your touch
As we drift upon euphoric tides,the tides of our loves rush
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-31 06:25:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 06:32:37 AM AEST (User
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Wow...lovely and sensuous... very niceeee....
Jenni |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 11:49:49 AM AEST (User
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Yummy....;o) Mable |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 09:17:39 PM AEST (User
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beautiful, just beautiful, in both content and poetry, |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:22:01 PM AEST (User
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love this,"your kisses drape me like fine lace" and "to feel the heartbeat in your chest.." *sighs* *dreams* a fine write... your a wonderful poetess.. |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 11:46:15 PM AEST (User
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Heavenly ... |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:20:29 PM AEST (User
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Oh wow...now that I got into...lol
I love it! Excellent!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:35:41 PM AEST (User
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I was drawn in and left speechless
~stacie~ |
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Re: Re: Tides Of Love...
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Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:42:01 PM AEST (User
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Just absolutely beautiful. Took me back in time, when my body and mind felt those same tides~! |
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