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Orgasmically Designed
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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Erotic splashes of moisture fall down onto our skin
As steam from passions fires rise from deep within
Naked bodies entwined,wet and sensuously warm
Tossed upon euphoric waves
The calm before the storm...
Thirsting tongues drink of the flesh awash in waters sweet
Tasting fresh erotic juices warmed in passions heat
Water trickles down my breast,heaving...inviting your mouth
You trace and swallow the glistening flow as it courses south
Between my thighs in fluid motions,you set to overflow the cup
Losing yourself in the warmth of me,a whirlpool of liquid love
To the storming sky I arch my back,surrendering to the night
Writhing there within your spell of passionate delight
Sultry sighs escape my lips,rising from the heated core of me
As lightening cracks across the sky,I taste sweet ecstasy
I lie in waters rippled,from the turbulence of its force
Quivering in its heavenly wake as your tongue shows no remorse
I feel your nearing breath as it moves towards my face
Up along my tenderness as mouth and skin embrace
Lips glistening with moisture as they catch the summer rain
Parted slightly for the pleasure of your tongue again
Trembling with elation as I draw your mouth to mine
Mingling in juices, intoxicating like red wine
With soft caressing movements,my hands explore your flesh
Tempting your desires as your fantasies I undress
Sensations overwhelming,stirring deep within
As silken legs of ivory wrap around and pull you in
I rise to meet your body,licking moisture from your chest
Along your back I graze my nails as you kiss my breast
You thrust into the depths of me,I devour your love whole
An harmonious sound fills the night as we forsake all control
Dancing in the pouring rain,our bodies drenched and warm
Lightening flashes across the sky as together we ride the storm
Moulded there together,passion and desire entwined
Two rain soaked bodies lie as one,orgasmically designed
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-31 19:53:29]
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 07:02:37 PM AEST
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Great imagery, Whispers.... so vivid....:>)
Jenni |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 09:25:14 PM AEST
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| is it hot in here or what!!!!! massive, passionate engaging and so well written poem, sounds like you were havin fun as well, always a bonus lol |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:17:26 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, expressed, love it... *says wow and wow, and gets a drink of ice water* |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:44:13 PM AEST
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| whew...:blush: this is a GREAT piece, Loving. very intense & erotic. love it. :hugs: |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 02:46:42 PM AEST
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| WHOA!!! I liked it, You definetly put me there and it was a very wamr passionate wet experience!!!! Kudos for you. "G" |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 05:30:45 AM AEST
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| so vivid.. venkat |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:44:28 PM AEST
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Yikes - I think I hear thunder!!!!!! very vivid erotic write - nice work
merry |
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Re: Re: Orgasmically Designed
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Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:57:39 AM AEST
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This poem may be a few years old but I just had to comment, WOW this is awesome!!!
~Jenny~ |
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