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Hung From Cold Rafters
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:40:04 PM in AEST
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FUCK YOU
FUCK THE WORLD
FUCK IT ALL
Go yell your stupid childish words at somebody who gives a shit
'Cause I don't deserve to sit here and take it
I can make you scream and I can turn your pathetic life to hell
But I won't, 'cause I'm a good little girl - well,
You've dug your own fucking grave
So I'll just sit by and wait
Watch Karma step all over you
'Cause any chance you had is through
GO AWAY
YOU CAN'T CHANGE ME
THIS IS OVER
I could bury you alive but you would suffocate too soon
And you don't deserve to die under the same moon
And you're not good enough for the dirt that you would choke on
But I'd love for you to never see the crack of dawn
I'll never look at you again
And you'll hate yourself for it when
You don't walk me down the aisle
Boyfriend's daddy can walk that mile
Mommy isn't perfect but she's not a fuckhead like you
You can turn your back on me
But you can't ignore the way you've fucked me up mentally
You'll hear my screams and there's not a thing that you can do
Treat me like you have all along
But we both know you'll always be the one that was wrong
I'm the victim but I'm the winner
You're just a worthless messed up sinner
And for all the hurt you've caused you'll pay
None of this will ever go away
You failed as a husband
(Mommy deserves better)
You failed as a father
(You couldn't be deader)
You failed in life
(It's so fucking sad)
In my mind you hang from cold rafters
In my mind all I hear is laughter
You're so dead to me
And I feel so free
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-09-17 23:40:04]
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:44:26 AM AEST
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The line about the moon isn't supposed to have the word "same" in it. Don't know how I did that without noticing. Just thought I'd let you know that.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 06:00:44 PM AEST
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Whoa..I like. I too have such a 'loving' father..I dont know how the hell they can actually stand being the way they are. *****es me off how my dad acts. I really loved your poem here, thank you for sharing yet another wonderful write.
*_-Psych-_* |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 10:08:20 PM AEST
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| I bliss in the anger you have released. Excellent write. The beginning says it all. |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 07:37:12 PM AEST
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| i too have a similar murerous rage toward my sperm-donor(father) your feelings are so raw and desrved. i loved this poem. it inspires me to write some of my own. |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 09:12:47 PM AEST
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Absolutely loved this! I know the rage that you're feeling for your words also reflects my situation. Thank you for sharing, it gives me relief to see these words, feels like I'M the one that vented.
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
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| Ok, mine was not that bad. I don't hate him anymore it's not worth my time. I can totaly relate though. I liked it a whole hell of a lot. |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:53:08 PM AEST
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| i love this poem! freakin excellent! |
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Re: Re: Hung From Cold Rafters
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Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:32:08 PM AEST
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i can relate so much towards my father......good write
luv always |
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