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Beautiful Sound
Contributed by
Jessi95
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I saw you today
While I played around
I heard you speak
It was such a beautiful sound
You looked at me
And said Hello
And in your eyes
Your Beauty showed
I can’t believe
The moments gone
I can’t believe
It’s waited that long
Now it will all
Go back to the way it was.
I would ask you why
But all you’d say was cause
The way I feel
Does it shine though?
The way I feel
Can you believe it’s true?
Can you possibly
Feel the same?
Or is this all
To you just a game?
Yes you were there today
And you where playing around
Don’t you understand?
Your voice is a beautiful sound?
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Jessi95
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2010-04-22 19:23:58]
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Re: Beautiful Sound
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by Nevilleconnie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 08:16:36 PM AEST
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| Another great poem. I always said a poem should be created with deep emotions and not fancy words. You do this very well. As long as you feel the emotions while writing a poem, that's all that matters. poetry is a way to release emotions that you have inside, and as long as you feel a measure of joy and relieve when you've finished writing a poem, that's all that counts. |
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