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Array ( [sid] => 172904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remember [time] => 2012-06-08 18:05:33 [hometext] => I've been getting some good comments on my poems so far so I decided to post some more every now and then [bodytext] => We remember the past for what we thought of it, but back then we never looked towards the future to see the hints of what will happen. We are all stuck in between past, present, and future. Those three words connect us. When we were younger we believed that life would always be like how it was. Now we are maturing and so many of us are in tears wishing to go back. Before we knew the evils of the world, but it's all written in stone nothing can be changed. We may regret, we may even beg and suffer, but that will only change how we see our selves. You hear what other people go through and you may comment and judge on their life because of it. But some people don't realize we aren't the same. What one person may call a daily problem others have already soaked them selves in their own blood and tears because of them. When you judge someone because you think you had it worse you don't know what they have been through. You don't know why their tears fall. Then it's on the news. Another suicide victim ends it. You feel like *****. You want to apologize and make everything right. You refuse to see the truth, but deep down in the bottem of your heart and conscience that there is no hope. You sit crying on your bed not knowing that the final memory of that person added their pain to your misery. 



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Remember

Contributed by Lhd100 on Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 06:05:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



We remember the past for what we thought of it, but back then we never looked towards the future to see the hints of what will happen. We are all stuck in between past, present, and future. Those three words connect us. When we were younger we believed that life would always be like how it was. Now we are maturing and so many of us are in tears wishing to go back. Before we knew the evils of the world, but it's all written in stone nothing can be changed. We may regret, we may even beg and suffer, but that will only change how we see our selves. You hear what other people go through and you may comment and judge on their life because of it. But some people don't realize we aren't the same. What one person may call a daily problem others have already soaked them selves in their own blood and tears because of them. When you judge someone because you think you had it worse you don't know what they have been through. You don't know why their tears fall. Then it's on the news. Another suicide victim ends it. You feel like *****. You want to apologize and make everything right. You refuse to see the truth, but deep down in the bottem of your heart and conscience that there is no hope. You sit crying on your bed not knowing that the final memory of that person added their pain to your misery. 



Lhd100 , PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.





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Re: Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th June 2012 @ 06:39:31 AM AEST
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I have to confess when I clicked on this and was confronted with a wall of text I almost left without bothering to read it, but I'm glad I did.
You express yourself wonderfully. But perhaps some paragraphs or stanzas or something would improve it?

Cheers,
Mickey.


Re: Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by BekachewSunderman1011 on Monday, 18th June 2012 @ 07:12:52 PM AEST
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this is REALLY good! it's so easy to relate to.




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