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Contributed by ming on Wednesday, 4th May 2016 @ 10:41:52 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

and visions
I see the words
like dark smoke
a twisting filament
through every
empty frequency
calling across
the vacuum
coming undone
breath and bones
ties and connections
sacrifice and power
words shattering
before finding
a way out
mouth folded
into a cardboard
and possibilities
crouched waiting
in shadowed corners
for an unraveling
layer by layer
as the void
watches me
watching it.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2016-05-04 22:41:52]
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Re: Gibber (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 6th May 2016 @ 04:09:38 AM AEST
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Well expressed, poet ming.

tongue-tied, gob-smacked, temporarily mute, just before the platitudes and drivel leak out - best to stay silent or pour forth without filter....hmmm.

too many times I recall losing the opportunity through hesitation, or mouthing vacuous nonsense - please provide a cure in your next post!


Re: Gibber (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 6th May 2016 @ 02:41:05 PM AEST
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paper roses,all we ever do is learn the laws of the trellis to better understand the rose, i would wile away the hours , conversing with the flowers, we/'/d sit and talk for hours .loved your wisdom

Re: Gibber (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 7th May 2016 @ 02:58:44 PM AEST
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An excellent display of your now quite identifiable unique style.

Strong content and message.

You know I/'/m a fan, so I won/'/t gush.



Re: Gibber (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th May 2016 @ 11:50:01 PM AEST
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Procrastination is the child of regret. Stop watching, and sweep all those corners clean. Mouth, clearly, and send those lies and half truths away with a swift and certain wind. Let the words speak as you hear them. Passionate and encompassing.

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