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Addiction without acceptance

Contributed by Lauranhyde on Thursday, 1st March 2018 @ 11:47:40 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



I tell people Im fine
You dont control me
You dont abuse me
Youre always there for me
You understand me
Take me to a place Im happy.
Whys that so bad ?

Sure, Im with you everyday
I spend every spare minute with you
But you make me happy
You make me forget my problems.
People dont understand that without you I am nothing.

When I dont have you
I feel incomplete
Im lost
This world so dark without you.
I feel alone.
I hate being left with my thoughts without you.
I dont like it when I dont have you.

Youre all I want
I dont care who I loose
I dont care what people say
You, you are what makes me stay sane
You are whatís keeping me alive in this crazy world.
I dont like people.
I donít like the way we are.

I will never give you up.
I dont care who I loose in the process.
My family, my girlfriend, my friends
You are all I need.

The feeling of getting a bag full
The happiness of smelling that dope scent
That joy you have when you take your first bong
Nothing beats the smoke filled lungs
Nothing beats the feeling of weed.
Weed is all I need.




Copyright © Lauranhyde ... [ 2018-03-01 11:47:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Addiction without acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 2nd March 2018 @ 06:56:37 AM AEST
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U grab me from the git go.
You have giving ne inspiration and that/'/s a
very good thing and not easily done

peace out
emy


Re: Addiction without acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 2nd March 2018 @ 05:43:34 PM AEST
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A nice twist from leading us to believe you are speaking of a lover, only to find out the lover is weed.
This begs rereading once you know the ending, and the way you tell the tale makes second reads as spellbinding as the first.
Your sarcasm has a gentle touch. There is empathy and affection even as you scold.
A very complicated piece that looks simple but isn/'/t!! Well done!
softerware


Re: Addiction without acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 01:54:56 AM AEST
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ahh you have been buddah blessed


Re: Addiction without acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Tuesday, 6th March 2018 @ 05:02:05 PM AEST
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Addiction is a powerful illness that changes people in the worst ways. I just finished a tour in rehab (literally graduated a few days ago) and now i can see just how much my addiction changed me. This poem had some power in it and i thank you for sharing it


Re: Addiction without acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 02:54:32 PM AEST
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Nice style you wrote this with. Everyone has something they struggle with and unfortunately you can only change yourself.
Patience and understanding are key, and setting good boundaries. All the best and keep writing.




~Scorp




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