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Beautiful night to be lonely
Contributed by
Vic
on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 04:52:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Been out of my head since the sun arose today
Needed a drink to put them thoughts away
Nobody I know can help me get over it
Everybody/'/s gone when I need that spirit
The waning golden moon is coming nicely along
It/'/s a beautiful night to be lonely and write a song
I never meant to pen a tune this way
Well it ain/'/t bad recording events of the day
The evening progressed into nothing better
I feel less of a singer and more of a fretter
The waning golden moon would look mighty fine with booze
It/'/s a beautiful night to be lonely and play the blues
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Vic
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2020-09-17 04:52:07]
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Re: Beautiful night to be lonely
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by Aurelia on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 01:10:33 PM AEST
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You write like a beautiful, clever country song. My favorite lines were
"The evening progressed into nothing better
I feel less of a singer and more of a fretter"
Well done. |
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Re: Beautiful night to be lonely
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 03:57:06 PM AEST
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That third stanza was especially great and gave me a smile/giggle.
How many of these fantastic old writes do you have kicking around?
It can definitely be a lonely time of year made lonelier by everyone being busy/away. I like how you described the feeling in an authentic way while adding humour and solutions to make it through another day. Thank you.
~Scorp |
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Re: Beautiful night to be lonely
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by speedy on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 10:49:32 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful! Great write.
Hannah B |
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