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Cosmological dust
Contributed by
Vic
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Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 05:28:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stay away, be afraid
Don/'/t you touch the fire
Night and day, prepare
To get what you desire
I ain/'/t no clay nor crust
Made of cosmological dust
Starlit sky, delight
Hides a secret you can/'/t see
Live and die, retire
Wise up and you will be
Old feelings left to rust
Turn into cosmological dust
Time to say, debate
To be true and not a liar
Lonely lay, refrain
A woman can take you higher
If super smart she must
Know about cosmological dust
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Vic
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2020-09-17 05:28:44]
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Re: Cosmological dust
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 03:49:40 PM AEST
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This is a good poem and you say it is an old one! Lucky us you unearthed it and shared.
I like the warning to stay away at the beginning, then ending with a decidedly positive note that hints at company. Fun to read- thank you!
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Re: Cosmological dust
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 11:47:20 PM AEST
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I/'/m with Scorp on this...
Very interesting write and lead in.
Well done... |
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