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Gravity
Contributed by
Vic
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Monday, 21st September 2020 @ 03:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What goes up must come down
I walk the stairs
But I/'/m on the ground
Can/'/t remember what I meant to think
Was it false or true
Like a silent sound?
I can see it better when I don/'/t have what I sought
You can live a life that/'/s worth
Or leave a grave
That/'/s never found
If the largest lake
Became a tiny sea
Would it be shapeless, square or round?
I had to lose almost all to find my sanity in distraught
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Vic
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2020-09-21 15:03:39]
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Re: Gravity
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by Aurelia on
Monday, 21st September 2020 @ 03:32:23 PM AEST
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"You can leave a life that/'/s worth / Or leave a grave / That/'/s never found"
So profound and poignant. Sometimes it/'/s hard to be grateful for the tragedies life makes us endure, but you/'/re right in that they orient us in such a way to enjoy their absence when granted a reprieve. |
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Re: Gravity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2020 @ 05:33:26 AM AEST
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| Quite relatable and so very true. Very well written. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Re: Gravity
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2020 @ 01:06:00 PM AEST
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//I can see it better when I don’t have what I sought// ... that damn grass always looks so green on the other side ... until we are standing on it. ...Also that closing line... it is messed up how it takes profound tragedy and loss to truly gain strength, and the brink of insanity to induce sane thinking.
Powerful write.
~Scorp |
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