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Memory of Jackson
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
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Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:53:40 PM in AEST
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My little boy,
Was just barely born,
When I learned of his problem,
Now his life has become torn,
He couldn't pay attention,
And had a constant drool,
He had to learn a special way,
In a special school,
Whenever he got down,
Whenever he felt sad,
He'd always come to me,
Until he wasn't sad,
I never told him no,
And I never yelled too strong,
He wouldn't understand,
He will never, for so long,
His sickness was too much,
It caught up to him one day,
But that day came too fast,
Becuase my boy then went away,
I sit down by his grave stone,
Just wishing for a hug,
But I know now the true meaning,
Of a son and mother's love.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
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Re: Memory of Jackson
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:39:32 AM AEST
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| awww...(((((deep hug))))) I lost an 8 day old infant .. so I don't really know your pain .. but I do know a bit .. keep writing...it never goes away . but the color fades from black to gray ... it takes lots of time. I'm here; nuts but here ..;-) |
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Re: Memory of Jackson
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:01:21 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing your feelings. A lost of a child is never easy.
Whisper |
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Re: Memory of Jackson
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:10:06 PM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written. A fine tribute to Jackson.
a masterpeice.
huggs, luv, strength,
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Re: Memory of Jackson
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by breny on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:56:29 PM AEST
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Wow! The structure of this poem is good but that it says is even stonger. This had to be so hard for you and I'm terribly sorry for your loss. But at least you can write and get your feelings out. A very good and emotional write! Bravo!
~Brenna~ |
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