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The Chill That Remains
Contributed by
ThemSheeps
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 07:47:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Have you ever known a Cold that was hot:
A Cold that confused the senses?
Have you ever sought for heat but not
Been able to build up your defences?
No fire can drive out this Snow
No fleece can fend against the Cold
No furnace can soften the blow
For ones hearts still gripped in Its hold.
Such a Cold I can feel when we are far apart.
Only the love and warmth in your smile
Can melt this Frost from my heart.
All that is left for me to do
Is try and say how much I love you
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ThemSheeps
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2005-08-16 07:47:41]
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Re: The Chill That Remains
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 08:31:44 AM AEST
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Short and to the point.. Nice write
Have to agree Yes.. Sure at some point we all felt this way about a love...
Its up to you to keep that fire lite in your heart---too many flickers it will fall apart..
Wish you luck.. Write on!
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: The Chill That Remains
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:53:47 AM AEST
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WOW........amazing this one!
Well done......
This kind of love is what I am experiencing atm and it hurts deeply....Met someone...fell in love with him a while back but now that we have met..I love him deeply.....he now back in his own country tho..and it aches me heart. He needs time to think things over and leaves me confused.....
Huggssss,
Nats.
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Re: The Chill That Remains
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:57:48 PM AEST
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Love is very much like that. And to know it and feel it in all it's realities is wonderful. Terrific job.
Loende |
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