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Anew
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:07:12 AM in AEST
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Summer breeze kisses her face Today old pains she will erase As she runs into the waves of blue She decides to start her life anew
In the ocean she chooses to start Letting the water cleanse her heart To live to find she truly believes In herself and she can achieve
Her dreams will unfold from here Because her heart is filled with cheer To love herself she has learned And the rewards of such she will earn
Anew the life she holds will grow And letting go of past she knows Will open the future to new heights She looks forward to lifes rocky fights
And the joy a new attitude brings For lie ahead so many wonderful things No longer old mistakes she will review For she has learned to start life anew
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:39:22 AM AEST (User
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Uplifting piece. Great rhyming. Flowed well for me. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:34:32 AM AEST (User
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cool, simple rhyme scheme but effective, very nice,
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:47:17 AM AEST (User
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This is a smiling poem.
I like this a lot. It had a nice theme, and it's great to see a positive poem on the homepage.
Nice attitude, and lovely feeling.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by JGB on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:57:22 PM AEST (User
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I like this alot. Thank you for sharing this.
Joanna |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 08:29:48 PM AEST (User
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a lovely poem my friend.
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:01:26 AM AEST (User
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Shari~
A most welcomed uplifting and inspiring write you have wonderfully penned my dear friend. Your poetry always has depth and meaning. Thanks so much for posting this Shari~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*sue m*~ |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by Winterland on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST (User
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Very nice piece with a lovely message for each of us.
Thank you!
Jennifer |
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