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Full Moons Light
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:50:48 AM in AEST
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She awoke in a clearing near the woods
Her hair matted, clothing torn and bloody
No memory does she have of the night
Everything is fuzzy and muddy
An echo of howls and eyes flashing
In the full moonlight
In her inner being
She sees a foggy sight
He watches as she rises
Her movements still part animal
He knows one day
She will accept her life full
But for now she chooses
To forget who she really is
But someday she will see
And then she will truly be his
And they will rule the shadows
Together they will hunt the night
And fear will reign in the forest
The moment of the full moons light
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NoSaint
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:37:25 AM AEST
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OOOOOoooo Shari, This was creepy. (in a good way) Good rhyming scheme.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:12:19 AM AEST
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It is a very good imaginative poem I appreciate the execution of the language.
FRANCO
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:15:39 AM AEST
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As others have said, a little spooky, i liked it very much, kudos,
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:45:00 AM AEST
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I like this. It's a little unexpected, actually. I like the atmosphere, and the uncertainty of the poem.
Great visuals.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:21:46 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem. It has all makings of a scary movie, of which I have watched many, full moon and all. Fantastic read. Sue x |
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by JGB on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:00:36 PM AEST
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I have come to love your writing. This is a great one!
Thanks again for the enjoyment.
Joanna
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 03:25:23 PM AEST
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Boy am I out of touch...lol I dont think Ive ever seen a write like this from you....all I have to say is MORE MORE!!!
I really loved this Shari
Chilling and very well done
Roses
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by wrdz on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:06:25 PM AEST
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| Nice way to let your mind go free. Nicely done. To put forth effort is to accomplish what we don't think we can do. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:35:18 PM AEST
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| Very imaginitive write. Brings a stirring picture to mind....Mike |
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Re: Full Moons Light
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 06:44:27 PM AEST
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Shari~
I'm not used to seeing you write like this, but I gotta say this was awesome. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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