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A Pharlap heart
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 09:46:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I let myself in
a cold key
to a cold bed
a cat cries
for her food
but nothing for me
a Pharlap heart
to run a mile
for your profit
and a patch of grass
but where am I
now, in this cold bed
after I ran that mile
and you talk big
about your wallet
giving me just this patch
my place in the world
a Pharlap heart
bleeding in vain
the key is cold
- so cold
laying on this bed
muscles tired
- so tired
when they would have burned
just for you
if you could have love
loved me too
as I loved you.
7/12/06
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2006-12-06 09:46:04]
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Re: A Pharlap heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:02:57 AM AEST
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i liked the flow of this and how the ending was.. I enjoyed this piece.. thanks for sharing.. great job
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Re: A Pharlap heart
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 07:22:37 PM AEST
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| wonderful write! I really like the flow of it and how easy it is to read yet stil has such a deep meaning.... I cried though....thank you so much for posting it! |
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