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It's Too Bad
Contributed by
allforyou
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Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 11:59:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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How long will this last?
This heaviness that pushes me into my grave,
I'm so afraid,
I've been gone too long to be saved.
What I would do for a little hope.
Some glistening light in the darkness that has overcome me,
But I have seen more than enough of the light that I need.
And somehow its never enough.
I find myself looking for answers to questions I never should have asked,
And scrounging for excuses for not completing my promised tasks.
Its too bad I've fallen,
because I was brought so high by appreciation.
Now I'm below looking simply for gratification.
All I can taste is pain,
I wish my brain was on cocaine.
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Re: It's Too Bad
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by Asthenia on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 03:34:55 AM AEST
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| i can totally relate to this, even now. I liked the last two lines of the poem, it just seems to sum everything up in my opinion. Darkness weighs pretty heavy, but we have to keep moving on in search of some light...good write, keep it up |
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Re: It's Too Bad
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by Mama508 on
Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 02:58:16 AM AEST
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Cocaine is a tough drug to give up...
I am a recovering crack addict...
So I feel the pain in this piece..
Beautifully written... |
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