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no questions no lies
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 08:07:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They all ask the same Neverending question They must think its a game
Why did you leave? They all ask again I reply with my favorite line Ask no questions and I shall tell no lies
It allows me to avoid you the Embarrassment I would tell them the truth That you were a let down, a failure, who had no unique views You sweet talked me into believing I liked you
How wrong I was With your every touch My skin crawled With your every word My head hurt
Your lack of caring is What did it the most Or was it the fact you talked As if you were a child Mocking me
I say yes You say yes I say no You say no I never once heard your own Opinion
So instead of saying all this I save you You should be grateful I doubt you are So I save you and say Ask no questions and I shall tell no lies
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Jen_unknown_to_myself
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2008-04-07 08:07:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: no questions no lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 09:00:18 AM AEST (User
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It is certainly venting your anger and to that end you have illustrated it.
Are these the words of on the spot rage, or were they really there all the time ?
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Re: no questions no lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 12:51:32 PM AEST (User
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truly expressive to the utmost feeling of discontent and frustration
i loved this piece
thanks for posting
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Re: no questions no lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by 143 on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 01:26:47 PM AEST (User
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Very Nice Write !!
..Well Put Into Words..
"Keep It Real"
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Re: no questions no lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilverRain on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 05:49:27 PM AEST (User
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a gracefull way to get out of a sticky situation. Well done for seeing it for what it is. Love makes you blind but not stupid!
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