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Confusing Clarity
Contributed by
ItsMeNow
on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 02:05:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Mind
Watching
Beauty
Wasting
Dark
Feelings
Blank
Sentences
Tears
Floating
Spirit
Wanting
Time
Ending
This
Black
Ice
Burning
Losing
Love
Falling
Up
Stars
Frozen
Missed
Kisses
Hatred
Smiling
Thundering
Silence
Tormented
Happiness
Answers
Questioned
Definitions
Undefined
Lonely
Company
Cursed
Blessing
God
Forsaking
Confusing
Clarity
And I remain alone
Copyright ©
ItsMeNow
... [
2009-02-20 14:05:36]
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Re: Confusing Clarity
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 04:28:20 PM AEST
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I am no one to tell you what the style of your write is called but i do love the meaning you portray in such small words
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Re: Confusing Clarity
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 05:42:32 PM AEST
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very original, good effort i would say.
-phil |
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Re: Confusing Clarity
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 03:19:45 AM AEST
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Yup, pretty much what R.M. & Phil said. Good job.
Also, this very much reminded me of something my sister did (God rest her soul). So much so, I had to come back to leave my comment later tonight because it seemd so many things were reminding me of her earlier today (or technically yesterday).
Anyway, take care and thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Confusing Clarity
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 01:10:20 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this.
I love the style.
Great write |
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